klanto dupur,stobdho bikel,meghla ekta din
jibon theke dhaar dibi tor nitanto sud-heen?
deoay jodi hridoy lage chaoay ahongkaar
chailei ki dite partis asto sagarpaar???
sukno baali,ashnato dheu,nona chokher jol
kimba prothom brishtibheja meyeta obikol?
deoar khelay niom mene swapno goris,hiseb koris
neoar khela behisebi
jokhon tokhon sob kere nis
hridoy kimba ekmutho bish,
ankre dhorar sesh kaarnish.
na bola je kannagulo sangee hobe tor
vulie deoar apekkhatei raat jaga ek bhor.
aajo bodhhoy swapno dekhis aakash kena jae......
jamnon ami bhebechilam megh makhbo gaae.
swapno tor,swapno amar harie jaoar aage...
brishti dekhar somoy ki tor ektu eka lage???
firie deoar kichui to nei khuchro abeg saar...
tor jonyo roilo sporsho amar kobitar.
khub....khub touching..r beshi kichu bolbo na..
ReplyDeletenice one ... i think tui tor nijer jibone er kichu experiecnce ar abeg theke like chis .... tai expression gulo bhaloi esche ... well done .
ReplyDeletebappok hyeche .....
ReplyDeleteexpression khub mature, content durdhorso hochche, khali form ta ektu kheyal koris. durdanto hoyeche ei kobitata :)
ReplyDeletekhub valo....chaliye ja
ReplyDeletewell try.. keep it up..
ReplyDelete"deoar khelay niom mene swapno goris,hiseb koris
ReplyDeleteneoar khela behisebi"....best lines without any doubt...
bapok hoeche...
ReplyDeleteata ager 2tor cheye onek besi touching..
tui to daruun premik re....ridoy choa akta upohar pelam sobai....
ReplyDeletekhub vlo...carry on
ReplyDeletehonestly satti khb valo hoeche... emotional
ReplyDeleteJust awesome... kono katha hobena...
ReplyDeletedaarun hoyeche re eii kobita ta!!! =)
ReplyDeleteits very nice.....keep it up....
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