Thursday, June 11, 2009

PROTISRUTI


Ekta bikel
sondhye hobe
kichukkhonei.......

Ekta nodi
gram vasalo
buker vitor.........

Ekta sorir
hridoy khoje
raatbirete..........

Ekta sotti
nisso holo
niom motoi.......


Ekta proshno
hotash holo
uttar nei..........

Ekta swapno
abadhyo khub
hothat hothat....

Ekta brsihti
atke ache
chokher patay.......

Ekta megh
brishti hobei
kotha dilam.....

15 comments:

  1. darun.. bhalo likhis to........ritimoto !!

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  2. bapok hoeche.....
    tor ai protivatar kotha janachilo na..

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  3. darun hoyeche re..... simply outstanding

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  4. really good...gaan lekh, kaje debe. tor lyric lekhar haat :)

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  5. khub bhalo sir....pleasure reading such compositions :) :).......

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  6. edik-odik theke jhere bhaloi to proshonsha pachhis!!!!!!!

    bhalo laglo

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  7. ei jaygatate plzz kichu bawali korisna......it s a request(4 sourav)......

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  8. amar pashe bosha ei cheletar modhye eto protibha chilo jantam na to....jene khushi holam!!!...Sayak

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  9. not bad .... tabe pratisruti ta last stanza tei joralo... chaliye ja .

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  10. that is really good!.........aaro lekh r post kor.

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